Mar 5, 2014

Crawling... because it's a Dungeon Crawl





I want to thank Sheri Savill and Trent Evens for creating the Dungeon Crawl. This is my first time participating and I am Uber Excited. 
The excerpt I'm sharing is from: Seduction... The Story of M I hope you enjoy. 

“On your knees,” he commanded in a low growl as he pressed down on my shoulders. 

I sank to my knees feeling his fingers leave my flesh. He moved and stood in front of me, while he opened his belt and pants, letting them drop to the floor around his feet. He held his erect cock in his hand, pulling back on the skin and exemplifying his swollen, plump, slightly purplish head. 

“Do you want it?” he taunted as he stroked it before my lips. 

“Yes Sir.” I whispered. 

“Show me. Come get what you want, princess.” He moved out of  his pants, taking a few steps backwards. I put my hands on the floor, moving his pants in the process and crawled towards him. “I want you to ask permission before you touch or taste my cock. Do you understand?” 

“Yes, Sir.” I looked up at him. “May I please suck your cock, Sir?” 

“No.” He moved back yet again. “This time when you crawl to me, show me that you really want to suck my cock, and get that ass in the air while you move.” 

I crawled to him again, moving slowly, letting my body sway as I kept my eyes on his cock. I arched my back, letting my ass rise high behind me. Opening my mouth, I licked my upper lip, then slowly bit my lower one as I reached him. “May I please suck your cock, Sir?” I looked into his eyes, trying to sound seductive. He held his shaft tightly, only the purplish head protruding from his hand. He took my hair up in his other hand and pulled me up, holding my head so that I could feel the heat of his cock on my lips. 

“Open your mouth.” 






18 comments:

  1. sighs, what an absolutely perfect moment! I curled my toes :D just like I did the first time I read this wonderful, wonderful snippet

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    1. Thank you, Joelle. This scene and the one that follows were my favorite to write.

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  2. A sexy crawl for a dungeon crawl, very appropriate. I flexed my toes too :-)

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    1. I flexed mine a little while writing this scene. Unfortunately it resulted in a charlie-horse... lol. Thank you for stopping by Jaye.

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  3. Wow, nice one, LA.! I'm sure she sounded quite seductive :)

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  4. Love it. Super hot and the crawl is perfect!

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    1. Thank you Normandie... I'm looking forward to more snippets from your new pirate series. The Buccaneer has me intrigued and will be added to my list very soon. Told myself no more new books until I get my current WIP done. (It's So Hard!)

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  5. Oh oh oh! I do love the begging part... oh yes, more please! Let her have it ~grin~

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    1. Thanks Cristina.. You'll be happy to know that eventually... he does 'let her have it' ~smirks~

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  6. Yeah, that's HOT. Damn, the authors on this hop are just hitting it out of the park. Great job, LA.

    Very happy to have you here!

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    1. Thank you, Trent. I am thrilled to be part of the Dungeon Crawl. I really like that the authors are allowed to expose more BDSM elements in their excerpts.
      The one you posted this week from A Lady And A Maid, was very interesting. The way you described the young lady in the cage... totally Awesome!

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  7. Hot, LA. Always fun to torture a sub like that.

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    1. Thank you, Corey. I'm glad you liked it. ;-)

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  8. Oh very nice. So hot! Love it :D

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  9. Damn, LA, that is some hot writing! Shit. Really glad you signed up for this thing.

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    1. Thanks, Sheri. I'm really glad you and Trent came up with this. I LOVE the Dungeon Crawl.

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